أنا كتبت هذي الفقرة فحاب آخذ رايكم فيها
وخاصة من حيث والمقدمة والخاتمة والموضوع وأرجو تنبيهي لو كان هناك أخطاء إملائية
الفقرة بعنوان : I’m proud to be emirati
There are many traditional in my country like camel racing and Al-Razeef. Most people like camel racing. It was only the sport of Bedouin. Races were help at festivals. But my favorit traditional is Al-Razeef. It is two facing lines of men recite verses. There are many people like different traditional
My country equal between men and women. In the past, women can’t study and do any things. Now a days, women can study n school and after that they going to study in colleges or universities. After finish study they can work in differnt jobs
Like almost all young people, I’m eager to learn more about the history and traditions of my people because I belive that the real wealth of the country is in it’s youth
أرجو منكم المساعدة في تزبيط الفقرة وتغيير ما هو خطأ
وإخباري ما إذا كانت المقدمة والخاتمة ملائمة للموضوع أم لا
أنتظركم يا أصحاب وهذا الموضوع قد يفيدنا جميعاً في الاختبار
فلازم كلنا نتعاون في هذا الموضوع لنستفيد منه ونجعل هذا الموضوع حوار جدي بيننا لتصحيح الفقرة ^^
ها اللي اعرفه وربي يوفقني ويوفقكم
في غلط
I think that many people is proud to be emirati
I think that many people are proud to be emirati
لان ماني موجدوه في الجملة عشان بيبول
I proud to be emirati because I was born in it and it gives me many thing. I like a culture and traditional activities like camel racing. My country equals between men and women ,they are equal in dealings . I think that there are lots of people proud to be emirati
There are many traditional activities in my country like camel racing and Al-Razeef. Most people like camel racing. It was only the sport of Bedouin. Races were help at festivals. But my favorite traditional is Al-Razeef. It is two facing lines of men recite verses. There are many people like different traditional habits and customs .
My country equals between men and women. In the past, women can’t study and do any things. Now a day, women can study in schools and after that theycan go to study in colleges or universities. After finishing study they can work in different jobs
Like almost all young people, I’m eager to learn more about the history and traditions of my people because I believe that the real wealth of the country is in it’s youth.
actually , i think its approximatly good bt u have some mistakes in connecting sentences , the uses of grammer and there isnt any intro. or conclusion
thnx
بس بصراحة عندك كتيييير أخطاء بالقواعد اللي لازم تصححها
طبعا انا مدرس لغة انجليزية للصف العاشر وبتمنى كل الطلاب يحاولوا مثلك
دعواتكم .. 
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